Clouds,
Ominous and grey
versus
Majestic and white
Engaged in a primal war dance.
Which one shall prove victorious?
Remnants of their fight
Rain down upon humankind
As snow and hail:
Cold and wet,
A trail of destruction in their wake.
Their onslaught continues across the sky
Playfully circling around the other
Each attempting to emerge supreme.
Battle in the Sky
February 11, 2010 by Cerridwyn Tiponi
a lovely poem , thanks for sharing it.
Glad you enjoyed it.
Sometimes it does feel like the elements are at war.
nicely visualised
Thank you for your kind words. Glad you liked it.
This reminds me of a story Grandpa would tell. I love it, great job.
I’m glad it evoked such memories. So very glad you enjoyed it.
I agree with the above…you have penned the battle in the sky so very well my friend. Thanks so much for linking with Potluck, your support are so much appreciated. Hugs x
Hi Buttercup. Thanks for reading the poem and enjoying it. You (and the others) have brighted my day.
dynamic and tense,
what a thrill.
your talent kills,
please visit poets so that they recognize your work.
BEST!
xxx
Thanks Jingle. I appreciate your praise. I am thrilled my work touches so many’s emotions.
This is an excellent poem. I love the way you show that battle of the elements.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com
Hi Teresa,
Thank you for stopping by and reading. I’m glad you loved it.
amazing comparison 😀
Thank you for taking a peek at my work. I’m pleased you like it.