September 25, 2010 by Cerridwyn Tiponi
Shafts of golden light
Pierce the low-lying grey clouds
Summer’s last battle.
Posted in Haiku, Poems | Tagged autumn, clouds, golden, grey, Haiku, light, pierce, Poetry, shaft, summer | 7 Comments
Very well written, and brings a very vivid image to the mind. Summer’s last battle indeed!
Thank you deadpoet. It was truly breath-taking…especially as I crossed the bridge and the water was reflected in front of it.
lovely piece.
Thank you Jingle!
love golden light … cool word flow.
Thanks Jingle. Pleased you liked it.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/
welcome to attend Poets Rally, link in a poem, visit and comment, have fun! Thanks a ton for the attention. Let me know if you have questions.
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Very well written, and brings a very vivid image to the mind. Summer’s last battle indeed!
Thank you deadpoet. It was truly breath-taking…especially as I crossed the bridge and the water was reflected in front of it.
lovely piece.
Thank you Jingle!
love golden light …
cool word flow.
Thanks Jingle. Pleased you liked it.
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/03/thursday-poets-rally-week-32-november-4-10/
welcome to attend Poets Rally, link in a poem, visit and comment, have fun!
Thanks a ton for the attention.
Let me know if you have questions.