I step barefooted
Onto the frozen concrete
Feeling only pain
February 22, 2010 by Cerridwyn Tiponi
I step barefooted
Onto the frozen concrete
Feeling only pain
Posted in Haiku, Poems | Tagged barefooted, concrete, frozen, Haiku, pain, Poetry | 8 Comments
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Well this is different, good job 🙂
Rebel
Hi Rebel,
Thanks for your comment. I have a nasty habit of going outside with barefeet in the winter. It really is painful. You’d think I’d learn by now.
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Thank you so very much Wordwand. You have been very supportive and kind. I greatly appreciate any honors bestowed upon my writing.
very nice. 🙂
so blunt and direct and can be interpreted in so many different ways, literal and otherwise.
Thank you for reading. You’re right, it can be interpreted in many ways. Only I know the literal meaning behind it. Giggles.
I love haikus.
Good job.
Here from Jingle’s.
hugs
shakira
Hi Shakira,
I’m thrilled you liked it and thanks for you kind words.